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Full Bloom: The Beginning
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| Title | Full Bloom: The Beginning |
| Content | We live in a world, where powers of all kinds are as normal as breathing, sleeping or even walking. These powers are boren in humans through strong emotions, as a proof for their desire, hate, love or other things that let strong emotions awake inside a human. These powers have always been known as Awakened Materialized Strong Energetic Emotional Desires, or short, AM-SEED and the people wielding these powers are known as “Blume”, meaning Flower. And the government responsible for affairs including Blumen. Is known as Garden. Return of Skadi"one year after, that a single student of the best middleschool in the country, went on a devastating rampage against a Boys only Church Academy of 4000 students, 150 teachers and 400 other staff members. In the rampage, over 1200 people were killed and the island the church academy was placed on, was frozen solid, never to be set an foot on again." “In the back of a classroom at the Saint Knight school, one of fifteen highschools in the country educating young knights Random male student 1: it's today isn't it? Random male student 2: yes, "he", will return. Random female student 1: are they really gonna realease him? After all he did? They must be crazy, it's only been a year since he destroyed the church academy. Random male student 1: but was there not a rumor about the church academy kidnapping and abusing girls from the nearby academies? And that he only destroyed the whole island because a friend of his, became victim to the church. Random female student 1: as you said, that was only a rumor. I bet he made it up himself, to have a reason to destroy the academy, after all he is just a crazy psychopath. “Suddenly the newly transferred, blonde school beauty who wields the name of a goddess, approaches the three students in the back of the classroom” Julia Winterbloom (Athena): excuse me, i am very sorry for overhearing your conversation, but since i have only been here for two months, i may have heard about the incident, but not about "him", who is it that you speak of? Random female student 1: Lady Athena, you do not have to be sorry about anything, we are sorry for discussing such a topic here in class. Uhm you see, the person we speak of, the person that created the frozen island, is a person who as you, has been given the name of a God because of his control of immense powers, the person we speak of, goes under the godly name "Skadi". And he will be set free of prison today, and will afterwards, join our Highschool as student. Julia Winterbloom (Athena): and why was he only, after freezing a whole island and killing so many people, only improsened for one year? Random male student 2: no one knows Lady Athena, when someone asks the teachers or other adults, they either say that they do not know or that the duration of his Punishment was decided by Garden. “Suddenly someone pops up behind Athena” Eran Edelrose (Ratatoskr): what do i hear, with my little ear. The icy queen of war shows interest in another student? The three random students “stuttering”: uhm... ya.... Lady Athena, we... uhm... have to go now. Goodbyeeeeeee... ”the three fast ran out the classroom” Eran Edelrose (Ratatoskr) “knowingly surprised”: huh, what is up with them? Julia Winterbloom (Athena): beats me, and who are you calling icy war queen? And who are you anyways? Eran Edelrose (Ratatoskr): Pardon me, milady Athena, my name is Eran Edelrose, i am part of the school newsletter team, my job is to collect any information possible, so i might be able to help you out milady. Julia Winterbloom (Athena): you will not be doing this for free, will you? Eran Edelrose (Ratatoskr) “Surprised”: “impressed whistle”, No surprise you got the name of Athena, you catch on to things fast. Your right, i follow the rule of “give and take”. Julia Winterbloom (Athena): aaaand you want, what exactly? Eran Edelrose (Ratatoskr): either an information of same or higher value or you will owe me one in the future. “Athena thinking for some seconds” Julia Winterbloom (Athena): an information equal to an information only adults know and do not wanna talk about. How about this information... “Athena whispers into Ratatoskr’s ear” Eran Edelrose (Ratatoskr) “Really surprised”: milady, we have a deal. Julia Winterbloom (Athena): so speak up, what is with the deal that, that guy... Skadi or what his name is, only got a punishment of one year after killing over a thousand people and destroying a whole island including one of the most important holy places of the country. Eran Edelrose (Ratatoskr): did you pick up the so called rumor those students before were talking about? Julia Winterbloom (Athena): that the Church Academy was abducting girls from the nearby academies and abusing them? Ohh and that, that guys girlfriend or so was one of their victims. Eran Edelrose (Ratatoskr): exactly, truth is, that is not only a rumor, it is the truth. And it was not his girlfriend, it was an older girl who lived in his neighbourhood, who was like a big sister to him. Who got kidnapped on her way home from the library. After she had not come home before midnight, her parents called his place and asked if she were over at his place. After hearing that she had not come home, he went out and searched for her, and found out she had been seen with some guys, and that one of the guys had the Church Academy’s emblem on his pants. After that, Skadi infiltrated the Church Academy and tracked her down, he found her, when the guys were in the middle of the act with her, she was restrained, had bruises all over her body, and had no light in her eyes, she had already given up all resistance. As he saw that, he simply lost control of all his emotions and let his anger take over, he destroyed the Academy and killed all people who were inside it at that time. The only survivors were him, his neighbour and all other kidnapped girls. Eyewitnesses say that his eyes were cold as ice, as if he had just lost all hope, as he came out carrying his neighbour in the arms. Julia Winterbloom (Athena) “angry”: what a bunch of filthy animals, they got what they deserved. And that Academy was called one of the holiest places in this country? Then this country is Rotten! All the way to its core. Eran Edelrose (Ratatoskr) “amused”: “giggle”, first time im seeing that expression on the, ever so calm queen of war who always keeps a calm mind. ohh and by the way, there is a video online of the last scene of the story, if you give me your number i can send you a link later. Julia Winterbloom (Athena) “expressionless”: even i have emotions and expressions you know. But fine, here you go, my Yggdrasil name, send me the link there. Ohh and one more thing, you never said who your source to that story is. Eran Edelrose (Ratatoskr): ohh, did i not? My source is the victim of the story, the abducted big sister neighbour of Skadi. And one more… Skadi himself. (To be continued...) |
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