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Full Bloom: The Beginning

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Full Bloom: The Beginning
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The Waiting Athena

  "As the School bells chime of the Morning assembly and release the students into their classes. A young man with light blue hair, wearing the school uniform, lays in the shadow of a tree in the cortyard taking a nap". Light Blue Haired Boy: "hmmmm... aaaah ah... is it over already? i thought i at least had 15 minutes more... why did that wench even make me go back to school? everyone will be talking about me, both in front of me & behind my back... aaaah ah, what a drag... wait, is this some kind of revenge for the broken television? but that was DEFINIETLY! her fault.... "sigh" i'm getting tired just thinking of her... WAIT! why did i even show up? hmmm, because of my perfect attendance record in Middle school? oh well, might as well go to class... ohh wait, that wench did mention something about the director wanting to see me after the assembly". "5 minutes later at the director's office" Ursus Wellington: yes that's right Miss Daisy, have it done by the end of the week~~~ "knocking on the office door" Ursus Wellington: Aaah, Seems like he is here. You may leave Miss Daisy "while walking towards the office door" Miss Daisy: "huh? did the Director just Smile?" Ursus Wellington: Come on in "while Miss Daisy leaves the office, the light blue haired boy enters" Miss Daisy: "hmmm, not bad, he got quite the looks, i wouldn't be able to see a monster of calamity behind those eyes". "she thought with a enjoyed smile on her face" Ursus Wellington: aaaah Kale, you are Finally here, i've been expecting you ever since Lilly told me about your performance in D'archeis, 6 Months ago. Light Blue Haired Boy: "hmmm, Kale? feels like an eternity since someone has actually used my Real name, the old wench always just called me "Kid", and the squads... ohh well, i guess i'm back to my normal name now that i'm just a normal school kid, Kale Galanthus it is then" Kale Galanthus (Skadi): hmmm, so you are that old wench's Teacher? and? why am i here? do you and her really want me to just be a normal school kid again, after this year of blood filled battlefields? Ursus Wellington: Exactly, that is Exactly what we want Kale, you are still young and haven't lived out that youth yet, and after your battle 2 months ago, Lilly called me and told she was beginning to see the life fading in your Eyes again, and that's why i told her to send you here. So now that you are here, you are just a normal school kid again, well with time you'll get used to being back. Now off to class you go. (in Progress)...
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