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Prologue – I Got Transfer To Another World, But Accidentally My Sister Came With Me!!
It's about a boy, who have nothing left in the world but his little sister. One day, he got unexpectedly transported to Another World but wait, his Sister got transported alongside him too!!
PS: It's just a Prologue, what I'm writing might be to late for the contest, so...
Hewwo~~! Your stories has a lot of potential! It’s quite rare to see an isekai story with a family member that also got teleported with the main character! The (somewhat) isekai anime/manga/light-novel that I remember having somewhat similar premise where the main character were transported with his/her family relatives was ‘Okaa-san Online’.
So, seeing you with this new (and quite unique) story that you’ve created, makes me excited. To be honest the anime for ‘Okaa-san Online’ was not that good. Not gonna lie, they could make it ten times better if the execution is not bad and the story is not cliche. So with that being said, I hope that you’re still looking forward to this series and not making it cliche or that kind of stuff.
Overall! Great start of a story! I wish I could see more of it though! >.<
Thank you so much for your positive review. It’s not my intention to write a story like ‘Okaa-san Online’, and I’ve started writing my story in march so i didn’t had much time to wrote an entire story in just one month.
I’m taking my time wrote a story that i think everyone would like, so this is not the end of story. 🙂
I liked the prologue. I am working on stories myself and they contains magic too, so I will be looking forward to seeing what kind of magic powers do your characters end up with. As a fellow writer, I’ll be sure to point out anything if I see, could be changed. Good luck dude and keep going.
Thanks so much for your positive review of my prologue, and I’ll be work hard on story too. 🙂