This is a group for premium members only. Post the first 1,000 words of your story in this group and send a message to @Vic to receive first impressions of your story (limit one story per month). When deciding what book to read, many readers look over the first few pages to see if it interests them. That is why it is important for books to catch the reader’s attention in the first few pages.
Paradise Lost – Fire traveler – A bad dream – The Rule of Three – Heaven and Hell (Prologue)
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