I’ve finished my light novel, the Shadow Girls. Would anyone be willing to read it for me and suggest feedback, positive comments as well as improvements?
We would gladly give feedback on your novel. That’s what we do here as fellow members. It’s good news that you finished one volume already! Well, right now we can’t read it since the file is apparently to large to upload.
Have you tried to upload it to the “Stories section”? We can either leave comments there or discuss it on this forum.